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Hi,
I was wondering if any Rise fans could beta read this Leosagi fic. It’s short and incomplete, but I’m working on rewriting it soon. The purpose for me asking for a beta-reader is to see how I can improve on my writing based on narrative, grammar, or any issues that stand out. I would like good and bad feedback so I am sure on what I need to improve and what I am at least pretty good at.
I’m going to put the story link in the comments since Tumblr wont allow me to add it to the post.
Thank you!
-I imagine Rise Usagi as a teenager like Rise Leo. All Leos and Usagis are in the same age range.- *2003 & 2012 Leonardos having a conversation*
2012 Leo: So, anything going on with your version of Usagi? *asks shyly and awkwardly*
2003 Leo: *slightly blushing* What?
2012 Leo: Don’t worry. Me too. *winks*
2003 Leo: *relieved* Not great, it would be better-
2003 & 2012 Leos: if he didn’t keep brotherzoning me.
*both surprised*
2003 Leo: He does it to you too.
2012 Leo: Yeah, and I can trying to get out of it.
*Rise Leo suddenly shows up*
Rise Leo: I don’t know about you guys. *brings out Rise Usagi(his boyfriend)* But Neon Leon is doing fantabulous!
I believe Leo would be flustered and insecure around the first few weeks of being in a relationship- particularly a samurai rabbit. *wink*
He would pretend to be someone he’s not like being extra confident. But when his partner tells him how much they care about them, Leo will start being okay in his own skin.
Hi everyone! I'm new to Tumblr and am excited to be here. This is my Rise Leosagi fic I'm writing. It's on AO3 and is a lot of fun to write. Comment your thought on it since I want to grow as a new Rise of TMNT fanfic writer! Thank you to anyone who reads it! 😊❤️
Here's the link: https://archiveofourown.org/users/MyFairyTitanSins
Leo: Don't worry, bunny-boy~ I'll make sure you'll like me, plus, I can't believe I talked to such a cute boy!!!
First meeting, Epilogue 💙🩵
Usagi: Grr! I will never 'hangout' with you, you stupid cute Kappa-Leo-whatever!! Wait... what's a New York...and did I just call him cute?
First meeting, Part 5 💙🩵
Usagi: No way! In your dreams, you crazy Kappa! And don't call me bunny-boy!!! If I ever see you again, I'll slit your throat with my sword!
Leo: Heh, don't worry, carrots, you'll go out with me sooner or later. Anyway, I gotta go, don't wanna be late for pizza. Welcome to New York, but don't worry, this won't be the last time you see me. See you around bunny-boy~
First meeting, Part 4 💙🩵
Usagi: EXCUSE ME?!! Why on earth would I go out with you!? You literally just met me!
Leo: Exactly! When you meet someone you like, you ask them out! And you've certainly caught my attention. Plus, you know you can't resist this handsome face~
So, shall we?
First meeting, Part 3 💙🩵
Usagi: Wait...excuse me?
Leo: You heard me loud and clear, bunny-boy! You're cute, I'm handsome! Why not go out on a date with me? I can treat you to an awesome time, what do you say, hermosa?
First meeting, Part 2 💙🩵
Usagi: Who are you?! Where am I?! Talk now, Kappa, or you'll no longer have a shell!
Leo: Ok, ok! First off, names Leo. Second, I'm a turtle, not whatever you just called me, and thirdly, I'm on my way to my favourite pizza place, but I think I'll have you for dessert, bunny-boy~
First meeting, Part 1 💙🩵
Leo: Did ya miss me, Bunny boy?
Usagi: That's Usagi to you, Leo!
These two are just soooo cute!!! 💙🩵
Them in my 2024 tmnt au (I did not knew what to name it tbh-)
Little reminder about my au, They're both siblings👍
"What's your favorite ship?"
...well...uh...
...how do I explain this without making myself look a bit insane-
Leonardo during the "Many Unhappy Returns" episode being disgusted by Splinter talking about Big Mama:
Also Leonardo in the future:
✨Double standarts✨
I love Leosagi sm
I should say that This is my version of Rise Usagi Miyamoto, he's NOT Usagi Yuichi, Just wanted to clear that up because usually red eyeliner thingy is used on Usagi Yuichi fanart by fans and not on Usagi Miyamoto so that may cauze some confusion, anyways y'all got the point
Have you heard of the FanFic "F#ck It, We Barn" by @butterfilledpockets ?
Hi!!! Does anyone recomend a leosagi (leochi) fanfic that is good? Bc the fic In sickness and in health KILLED ME, I'M DEPRESSED NOW AND I NEED SOME OTHER GOOD FIC TO RECOVER EMOTIONALLY FROM IT 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Just realized that me and my bf are super similar to leosagi-Hear me out now: I'm very VERY flamboyant and loud, I don't sleep, can be incredibly irritating, and have issues with responsibility.For him: he's kind, silly, with a heart bigger than his brain, loves rabbits, and name legit is another word for samurai. So what's the verdict
Planning on writing a Slowburn fanfic, but i wanna make 1st Person POV & 3rd Person POV. Yet I also want to gain readers but I know some people don’t prefer the other
off of this audio
(I have a lot of little drawings I’ve done off of audios and memes so I will try my best to make sure I at least have the original reference included)
I did two versions but was too lazy to finish either one.
Happy reading!
TW: PANIC ATTACK
So, there’s this ✨amazing✨ fic on ao3 called StarBlind and it’s by WeirdNCrazy and you should totally read it. It’s a blind!Leo fic and this is essentially what the extremely talented author describes him as. I can’t draw, so I edited on Leo in the Rise Movie. READ. NOW. @dancingthesambaa
My night art ideas are getting out of hands really 😭 Today we got Leosagi in Josef Lada's style but I gotta say they doesn't look that much terrible :D
There they are. The mythic alt versions.
Back on my (katana)shipping bullshit (I say as I make my first ever leosagi post)
(Tomorrow I might try to get a different photo with better lighting)
Back on my (katana)shipping bullshit (I say as I make my first ever leosagi post)
(Tomorrow I might try to get a different photo with better lighting)
Usagi!
This is just a visualisation for how I percieve him.
Btw where did idea to put red eyeliner on Usagi come from, bc it is quite common but in the actual series, he doesn't wear any?
Bone-man will be next btw.
Why are their barely 03 leosagi fics on ao3😭😭
(I'm aware a majority of them are probably on fanfiction.net but I have no idea how to search for anything on that site *sigh*)
Stawwwwppppp 🤣 Not Usagi hitting the Family Guy Death Pose lol
I love this so much!
Donatello: Oh, look! Leonardo and Usagi are standing under the mistletoe.
Michelangelo: [Eyes widen in panic.] Oh no!
Donatello: [Rolls his eyes and crosses his arms.] Come on, Mikey. Grow up. It’s about time Leo—
Michelangelo: [Frantically waves his hands, interrupting Donatello.] Not that! Raph told Leo that it’s tradition in Usagi’s dimension, when you stand under the mistletoe—
[Leonardo abruptly snap kicks Usagi in the face mid-lean, knocking him back. Then he turns to his brothers, giving them a thumbs-up like he just nailed the perfect kata.]
Michelangelo: [Facepalms.] —you fight them.
Raphael: [Leaning against the wall, snickering.] I call it ‘mistlefoe’.
[Leonardo, oblivious to the chaos, glances up at the mistletoe again, prepared to defend his honor from any other "attackers."]