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1 month ago

"this character should kill their abuser" they're 12

“this character should kill their abuser” i agree. unfortunately they wouldn’t do that.


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etc etc Yeah this is about steven universe and atla. No I don't think a child should have to go through the inherently traumatic act of murder You want a kid to look at his own hands and realise they snuffed out the life of someone else? You want them to agonise over morality? You want them to see blood and injury and the light leave a human being's eyes? Well. Maybe this would work for some stories. But not as as the happy ending you're envisioning I've always wanted to write a story about a child messiah/chosen one character who is forced to do this and the effects it would have on their mental health and ability to even socialise with other children Like the ending of owl house where she doesn't kill the villain guy but she watches him melt in acid rain and doesn't do anything about it It's cartoonified so you don't realise it but that is a horror movie level thing to watch happen I'm not saying they should have done an owl house future but it would have been nice if they dealt with that a little Like hey yeah I'm going to therapy to unpack the time I let a man get melted in front of me and I just let it happen Because in my mind the trolley was already speeding toward that one person and pulling the lever would just switch it to the other track With more people And does that make me a murderer? Was that a choice I made consciously at the time or am I just retroactively applying logic to it? Did I actually just freeze up and because of that I let a man die in front of me? Also no I don't want belos redemption arc or whatever either lol I can't say if that ending was good or bad (leaning toward good) Just that it was also surprising to me that it even happened and it would have been interesting if they explored it a bit
1 year ago
This Piece Took Forever But I Am Very Happy With How It Turned Out!

This piece took forever but I am very happy with how it turned out!

A Nausicaan Tusk Opera Singer named Yochk, I had a lot of fun making the character!

The design of the planet in the background was from the Star Trek Role Playing Game, it was the only depiction of the Planet Nausicaa I was happy with. Lovely to paint.


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3 months ago

Yeah, I've heard, which is why s2 feels like a bunch of interesting multi-chapter fanfic concepts squeezed into one season. But even so, it IS technically possible to write a story this way. You have to do it a lot in video games - certain levels and quests and other gameplay features will be made and you have to write around those. It's definitely a more difficult way to write a story, but it's possible (although why you would write a story like this when you AREN'T beholden to video game writing restrictions is beyond me) and one of the reasons I find video game writing kind of interesting. It's like a creative exercise.

Thing is, one of the things you have to do in that case is put in additional scenes that make the scene you HAVE to include make sense. Like, if the scene you want to include is x character disappearing to another dimension, that's fine, but you then also have to add a scene where people react to that and start looking for them, since that would be the natural consequence. You still get to have your cool scene, but then the scene you added reinforces the connective tissue between your cool scenes.

The thing that baffles me in season two is they just didn't do that. That's why I'm so confused - putting in a scene I think is bad on a critical level is one thing, but choosing not to put in something that would be so obviously natural to include is baffling. It probably was an intentional writing choice, but not including such an obvious action -> consequence element makes it seem like they just forgot. I get that they were trying to resolve everything in one season so they had to be picky about what scenes they included, but if you ask me, following up the disappearances of several people is more important to me than than flashbacks or new plotlines.

Besides, if they DIDN'T want to write in such a way that would require extra scenes to properly connect all their different ideas together, then they should have included less ideas in the first place. Each act in s2 feels like it should have been a season by itself. It's harsh writing advice, but sometimes you really do have to kill your darlings. The writers do this a lot with individual scenes...

(See: them not including any jinx or sevika interactions after act 2 because somehow they felt like all the other scenes had already said anything that needed to be said, completely disregarding that having two characters bond for two whole arcs and then never talk onscreen again is weird.)

...But they seem unable to do this with any of the bigger concepts they want to play with, like the noxus invasion or hexcore brainwashing everyone. I say this as a viktor and mel enjoyer (not that mel ended up having anything to do with the noxus plotline anyway), but removing either one of those plotlines would have left the rest of the season a lot more room to breathe.

Anyway, it also wouldn't be so bad if this was just one character they did this with, but every single time a character goes missing (which includes Sky as well, now that I think about it) it sets up the expectation that surely at SOME point, SOMEONE is going to start looking for one of them, and then that expectation is never fulfilled. That's why I can't just call it bad but WEIRD. Like, why would you do that? It makes it seem like nobody cares about them. Actually, no, to be fair, the firelights do make a mural for ekko, so good on him for being the only missing person anyone actually cares about, I guess.

There's some stuff in arcane s2 that's bad, like, on a critical analysis level, but there's also some stuff that happens that's just plain weird. Like, did you notice any time someone disappears in s2, nobody goes looking for them? Jayce, Ekko and Heimerdinger go missing and nobody ever mentions it. Same for Mel. It makes it seem like they were only gone for two seconds, but they were definitely gone long enough to notice.


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1 year ago
Rock On!!
Rock On!!

Rock on!!

Full body full colour commission for @cawsket


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4 months ago
They Say A Klingon's Ridges Are As Unique As The Human Fingerprint...

They say a Klingon's ridges are as unique as the human fingerprint...


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1 month ago
New AU Just Dropped

New AU just dropped


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4 months ago

Mel doesn't make a move on Jayce in this AU because she assumes they're dating for real, like most people would. You'd think this would be out of character for her because she's good at reading people, so you'd think she'd be able to tell it was a sham. But no. The thing is, she's right: they are dating! They just don't know it yet.

Arcane AU where everything is mostly the same but at some point after the academy and before the events of the show Jayvik got married for the tax benefits and so Viktor could have a last name for practical reasons and basically it's a fake dating AU until someone else points out that neither of them seem even remotely bothered that this will impact their future romantic prospects with anyone outside their marriage


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5 months ago

Viktor has some kind of mind-reading power, right? That's how he knows random stuff, like that Jinx's old name was Powder.

And Jayce was sent back to our main dimension BY Viktor to persuade Viktor not to do any glorious evolution shit because it doesn't work (because it starts an apocalypse for some reason).

So instead of immediately blasting Viktor, why didn't he just... Let Viktor read his mind so he could understand the consequences of his actions? If I'm not mistaken, didn't he end up doing that in the end anyway?

It's not like he doesn't know it's an ability Viktor has. The other Viktor would have told him. So...???


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